All Comments on 'Your Love Ch. 06'

5 stars, can't wait until Cat's dad, Jackson and Deacon get their due! There were some missed editing errors like "waste" instead of "waist" but great chapter.

starting to feel like the whole catching the bad guys is dragging.all they have to do is get an audit by a forensic accountant or something to get the proof.

I am no expert at writing, but I do enjoy a good story. So you ask for feedback, then her is my two cents. First of all, by enhancing your story, in making it a bit longer, I was able to flow with it. I like were this story is going. Five stars on that. I would suggest on future stories (and I do hope there will be plenty more) that you be very careful in having characters with an approximately the same name ("C"hristina / "C"atherine). About two third in the story, somehow the names got reversed. That kind of threw me off a bit and I had to go back and think it through. Take it as an Old Man commenting, because kid, you are off to a GREAT start.

I hope the next chapter is the confrontation!! 5

Other then a mix up with Cat's and Chris' names this was a great chapter.

I hope Cat has someone with her when she breaks the news to her dad. He seem really selfish and arrogant. I can see him trying to bully her into marrying Stephen. He has too much to lose.

I can't wait until it all goes down! I am glad that you have the two ladies become friends instead of enemies, that was a refreshing twist. I hope Mr Basin has enough of the stolen money put away because he will need it for bail. I have a feeling Stephen is going to try something and it is going to be life threatening.

All in all except for the name mix-up the chapter was AWESOME.