All Comments on '"Your Married Crush"'

who was speaking what?

who was thinking what?

was it all dialogue from one person?

was it all memories from one person?

And a MUCH better story line/format. This was literally impossible to read. Hard to tell who was talking to whom. And who ARE these people? Did you bother to proof read this nonsense? Simply awful.

1 star

How does one make sense of this strange interlude? Just not a coherent effort.

WTF was that?!?! This site has no standards whatsoever! This shit gets through and the actual good writers have theirs rejected for no reason at all.

If you don't understand this go back to Readers Digest. I love the fantasy. The emotional affair - I've been there. What little thing would turn it into physical? So instead this guy calls a sex hotline to talk about it. The person on the other end of the line would love to facilitate the coupling so the woman in question would be forced to admit she's as involved as the guy is.

Brave idea!

R.

TRY AGAIN CRAP.