All Comments on 'Your New Secretary Ch. 02'

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Yeah, this need to be series

I get how Dana could be hard to write however

I really like these stories! It's understandable that this story is hard to write, both Dana's personality and the theme overall is rarely made. I'm glad you make both of these. Although I'm not pushing for it, I would very much welcome any continuation of this.

This screams for part 3

I like the two stories. Dana being detached while being 'used' is excellent. And to subtly bring in how she enjoys being used is a nice touch.

Like another poster, I ain't massive on the anal either, but it's in there now.

Gave it 4 stars, and I'll keep an eye out for another part.

Thanks for writing :)

I like this series a lot as well, such an unusual character, I hope you continue. Five stars

Well done! Do you plan on writing additional parts to this series? It's very good.

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Excellent series, I hope there is a part 3 I think they could be a great couple

This has the potential to be an excellent series. It would be cool if he drew here out of her shell, and they ended up getting married. - I’m not sure what your intent for your Dana character is, but she behaves as if she’s autistic. Nothing wrong with that, but it can significantly shape the story’s vector. Is she autistic, (something else, perhaps,) or is her behaviour a product of her upbringing?, Will she come out of her shell,? Is she, in fact, an artificial life form? - I’m very curious to see which path this story takes.

Would love to see more here

Agree with the comments about more - getting her out of her shell and ultimately marrying the protagonist is how this really should go. Please, don't leave people hanging.