All Comments on 'Your son, my lover'

Don't most men wish they were nurtured and taught about sex in their teens by an attractive, experienced older lady with no husband to complicate things?

good, fun and sexual.

I don't know if this was before "Overtime" or after, both were good. I would have liked such tuition in my young days, 35 years ago, but those were rather repressed years over here :-(!

Thanks for writing,

John

loved the fun and lightness of their relationship(the conversation) inspite of their age difference. this is exactly what mature fantasies are made off. you are good man. just the kind of stories i like. thanks

For this reader,it was my best friends divorced mother.A great little story pity there are not more like it.

I've told you before, you are the writer who writes the stories that speak to me most here. - Ted

I see why and agree with the other comments and their giving you "100".

Kept my interest and very well written.. I think you could

even add a chapter to it.."his time at home before returning

to college" more sexually training making him a better

lover for some young thing...maybe even his friend at college..

I thought your post was very good,I enjoyed reading the fast paced and interesting story. There are countless more chapters you could write about this young hard boy,even up to bedding his mother, with all of the training he recieves.

Thank you

Rich in the USA

I fantasied about my mothers friends when they would come over to visit. wish one of them would have taken me home and had their way with me!! your story brought back some good memories of what might have happened. thanks

Why didnt this happen to me at that age lol :)

Loved the relaxed and honest dialogue style. Certainly can remember my early crush on an older woman. Regrettably she was oblivious to my charms. Great story bringing home childhood fantasies.

Real dialogue. Honest conversation. And, some great heat. A clean, fresh and rare tale of true blue eroticism. Keep it up...

An interesting premise, once I managed to suspend disbelief that a woman would volunteer her child for stud service. The sex was graphically steamy and the dialog realistic. It would have been more enjoyable if there had been some physical description of the characters. What did Elaine look like? Hair color / length? Same for Jamie.

KEEP WRITING - REALLY GOOD STORY - THANK YOU FOR IT!

Superbly well written, would like to see more stories .

As someone who married a woman 14 years my senior, 53 years ago, I deny that "it" can't last.

Your latest tale is one of the best I've read on this site. You are a gifted writer and have the knack of bringing fantasy characters (& my old pud) to life. Alas because I wish I'd had a loving, mature woman to show me into my adulthood. BTW: it's been a while since you wrote - slowing down some? Well, don't quit on my account. Thanks!

Great story,well written.I've been with ladies like this but don't think I could make a story of it the way you have.

You integrated sex with love i.e. intimacy in a sublime manner. No moment you forgot that sex is about communication while maintaining the erotic level. My compliments for that.

Thank you for creating and sharing this wonderful story.

You touched all my bases, covering all the things I like to do for ladies. The only thing that would get my pulse up even more would be to involve his mother and father and even perhaps some Gay and Lesbian play as well. (Hint - if you involve the father and mother, have them remove their dentures and give one another "Gummies.")

Loved this story , it flowed well and kept my attention-awesome , well done

Well written. Much better than most of the pitiful efforts of the semi-literate kids submitting to Lit. You obviously are well educated and/or enjoy the benefits of a very good proofreader. 8-)

Thanks,

de Jay

Great storyline going on here. I would love to see a second chapter either on the continuation of this "relationship" or possibly adding the mom into the mix as well.

a situation that probably happens more than we think...well, maybe not the best friend volunteering her son to satisfy her sex-starved neighbor. I know that I have dreamed about the same situation, with neighbors and with relatives, but never have had the guts to do it - still wonder how it would have been, but if it had been rejected, now that would have been terrible. I only once had sex with a much older woman whom I met on a dance floor in a tavern. Well, it really was great; she was uninhibited and I was overwhelmed. Had I lived in that city, perhaps it would have endured for a time, but as it was, only a one night experience. Funny how your stories conjure up a vision and allow me to "see" the story and then, afterwards, dream about some event or almost event in my life. That is what makes the fantasy world great! Thanks, Alex

Nice fantasy there. Very erotic, with overtones of maybe future love as well.

Since you asked for comments my only complaint is this line:

> "Remember, last year, the beach? You, Bob and me, Jamie, and Helen?"

I had to re-read the next few paragraphs a few time to work out who Jamie and Helen were. I initially guessed "another couple" but then the context didn't make sense. Perhaps something clearer like:

"Remember, last year, the beach? You, Bob and me, and our kids, Jamie, and Helen?"

good.

Real awesome storie keep it up!!!

Very well done. Very believable story line. I look forward to reading another.

I just loved this story. Which it happened to me when I was about 20

Lovely story. So open. So gentle (in parts ;) ) thanks

Good story suggest your read it and enjoy it as much as I did

I thoroughly enjoyed your story and wished it was about me! Jamie was a very lucky young man with a pretty amazing mom, too!

Loved the easy repartee between these two--arousing and seemed really possible.

Now, it IS a real stretch that Mom pimped her son to her best friend....but since it is part of the story, we might as well get all three of them on a bed together!

I'm looking forward to it...Great start!

Damn it would have been great to be in a position like that!!!! Very entertaining read. Thanks for sharing.

It took a while but I persuaded my wife to take her best friends son as a lover. He couldn't believe his luck when she first gave him his first fuck. As she was very apprehensive about the whole thing it was even more special because once she had him in her she really let go and had a ball. These days he fucks her at least twice a week even when I am at home. We are all three very happy about it.

Great quickie that was very exciting and well written. Most of your stories have heart, which adds to the enjoyment of reading them. The touch of romance from the young guy was perfect and completely plausible. Oh to be young again and have a lover like that, a dream come true. Thanks for writing it's much appreciated 😊👍

Excellent story, well written and truly erotic. Thanks for sharing.