All Comments on 'Your Turn Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Well written in a technical sense

But I wouldn't want to be this guy, or have this woman as a wife. This really should have been posted in either fetish or BDSM.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Lucky pussy

Poor wimp fucked up this story from the start by not trusting his slut wife to pick up men on her own while he watched. an insecure bastard with his in your face crap. he needs a monster cock up his wimp arse and that would make him a lucky dog.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
What a pile of manure

Just ridiculous. Bad even for fiction.

Jaydean409Jaydean409over 2 years ago

Great Story!! Ignore these jerks!!!

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