All Comments on 'Your turn, My turn'

by CharlotteBlythe

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Not romance and in serious NEED of editing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
My turn to comment

Wrong category, romance suggests a longer story, but a nicely done quickie.

WatcherRobWatcherRobalmost 8 years ago
Nice short story

Not sure what the complaints are. I liked it, quick and to the point. Will he be able to rise to another turn?

trigudistrigudisalmost 8 years ago
Not Romance Is Right

Erotic couplings is the more appropriate category for this one.

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