All Comments on 'You're Never Too Old To Die'

And dying can take a long time......

Some good parts, some bad. Overall it was to short but has a good base.

Could have been longer. AAA+++

Good story!

5

Really? "We are just two white guys who haven't had any in a while". You're portraying a lot of white on everybody else racism in this garbage. No one likes it when black guys are all portrayed as the only bad guys in these stories. It doesn't work the other way either. Stereotypes serve no one.

Good premise and OK narrative. Keep writing, you'll get better. By the way, having had a couple of broken ribs I can assure you that it takes longer than a week to heal, much longer!

You are a gifted writer and nothing attracts better that a Story Teller. When I read I live the story so grammar and real world time-lines don't matter, only the story.

Thanks You for sharing the fruits of your labor.

Regards,

Alan

I don't get it.

If he is such a badass why didn't he go after the cops who kicked his ass. I am a former paratrooper, infantry, and have two black belts. I definitely would have gone after the cops

Good but a little short.