All Comments on 'You're Not a Serial Rapist Ch. 14'

I like the story and love the characters, but think you detract from them with too much sex. Yes this is Literotica and the story isn't in the non-erotic section, but perhaps try to cut back a little and tell the story. Chapter 13 was a better read.

I am hesitant to say skip the steamy but a bit more balance of story to steamy would be my preference.

This is a great story, I have continued to read each chapter because it has story and isn't just a quick release. I am interested in the characters and what they are doing in their life but just over 4 pages that barely covered a night and day with 90% detailed sex was just a lot for me personally.

This is another chapter in a marvelous series. The plot is intriguing, and the wonderful love scenes impossible to skip over, as some critics do. They are integral to the plot and overall mood of the story, and they are neither repetitive nor excessive, but just right for the story as a whole. Five stars

Thank you for the time you spent reading and commenting.

This chapter was dedicated to the reuniting. The rejoining. The re-bonding of the two soulmates. The final stage the Plan, they had come up with six months ago, coming to fruition. Yes, it is 90% detailed sex and 10% "story". It was my plan to show that the love and devotion each of them had for each other never wavered. Bu,t it is only their first two days, as they begin the rest of their journey, together.

quite happy you did NOT have fourteen "Chapter 13" s