All Comments on 'You're On With John!'

Great story!

5

Cute, not very interesting, but cute.

Worth it.

thanks for the story

Once the innuendo sunk into my feeble brain, I chuckled and upped my rating. Good story.

That was fun. Tablet in one hand, latte in the other. Fun break in a morning commute.

Thanks

I loved it

Cute story. Well written, as always.

This was a fun story, but I can see how this would have been tough to cut it to 750 words. It was well written with some cute innuendo (thanks to pepepilot for that word I was racking my brain for—too early in the morning!) and you did a great job capturing the late night radio show feel (I almost expected a Frazier Crane "Go ahead, I'm listening" to be thrown in). Using the "brand new" car to to nail down the story timeframe after the drug explanation was a nice touch, too (and, yes, readers, that is correct, it's been around that long!). To avoid a spoiler, I'll send you message with one other comment. I'd rate it 4.5*, so I rounded up.

***Thanks for the read.

Not sure why this is rated low, I loved it. Cute, short, and sweet.