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yoongyoongover 4 years ago
WOW

Wow this story was so hot!!! Definitely one of my favorites from you and I hope hope hope there will be more to come in the future. Keep up the amazing work author and please remember to always take care of yourself first. We all may love your work but we love you more <3

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Very nice story...

Can't wait to read what's comes next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
More please

Love the chemistry between these two

kinkygeezerkinkygeezerover 4 years ago
Keep It Coming!

Hot and Sexy just the way I love a good story. Looking forward to the next chapter.

NjYjcG

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
So Fucking Hot!

Love this story. Please there has to be more. Can't wait to see where it goes.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Smutty and fun, just as promised!

I like!

I'd encourage you to add more tags to your future submissions. For example, this could have included "coffee shop" "barista" "nightclub", etc.; it can also be helpful to include the main character's names, "Seth", "Laura", so people who remember it can find it again. You'll also come up in more searches if you include the acts or positions, or partial descriptions of people, "hunk", "brunette", etc.

Please keep writing!

ravishmentravishmentover 4 years ago
Excellent~

Enjoyed reading that tale very much. Cannot wait for the next ~ Keep em cumming~

Privates1stClassPrivates1stClassover 4 years ago
A story this hot...

deserves a sequel. Oh please, post Chapter 2 (and 3, 4, etc.) as soon as possible. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
FIVE STARS!

Now give us chapter 2.

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