All Comments on 'Yours Ch. 02'

This is a very good story. I like the characters and their interaction. I like the way you got them together and they seem to merge together in such a loving manner. At the end of this installment, you seem to end on a question. Are you looking for interest in more installments or just playing? I would read more if you chose to write more. 5 stars. Thanks for your time and imagination.

I can imagine this happening when you lust over someone you see every day and finally get to experience real love.

I am working on chapter three of Laura and Seth's story now. Hope you enjoy it.

Stay Safe and Stay Healthy

Cheers,

Smuttyandfun

Meant to press 5 but would have 10 if there was one. That good of story !!!

Ok I understand where this story is published and understand the stroke factor. And it’s a well written story with plenty of stoking possibilities.

But here is the problem. As great a writer as you are it was all sex and no story.

We are supposed to ignore that this supposedly smart woman, running her own business, is going to just fall for mr. sex without anything more than a pretty body and a bit of lust? No mutual looks at the world? Nothing to indicate that they are compatible in any way other than sex?

I am disappointed BECAUSE you are such a Great writer and expect better.

A cheap lawyer. First he fucks her in a private room at a club, so much more germs etc, then in an elevator.

Supposedly well educated and owning a business yet she's so desperate for Xander!! Pathetic.

His boss was railroading him into a relationship with his friend's daughter because she said she was pregnant with his child....boss is an asshole and he should have left for another law firm at least.

Agree with previous comment.