All Comments on 'Yours for the Evening Ch. 02'

by ScarlettSlave

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
so good

this is a very good read, you have done a good job , as far as i am concerned , hope you write more. keep up the good work

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago

wow....great story and beautifully written

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago

best I've read in a long time ... beautifully written!

laquetislaquetisabout 14 years ago
Intriguing story

Erotic and captivates leaving the reader wanting.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Hot

But ends way too fast.

GemTomaGemTomaover 13 years ago
I'm really digging your story

can't wait to read more of you, thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
MMMM.....

CH 1 set the scene,CH2 is horney...can't wait for more!!

Aftermath_day_afterAftermath_day_afterover 13 years ago
Five hour drive to Heathrow

I see...

Just holler, and I'll drive you ;)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Amazing!

I wish there were a chapter 3. You are an incredible author. And this sounds like a very fun story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

You have the balance just right, of pleasure/pain, of charm and cruelty, and the story is electric. Congratulations, cant wait to read more! You are very skilled at writing erotica.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Ever planning on finishing?

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