All Comments on 'You've Made Love'

by Hayson

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Queen of MarsQueen of Marsalmost 18 years ago
Love Letter?

This was an interesting use of narrative, almost like a love letter. But who was this man? An unrequieted lover? A deceased lover? A current and very open-minded lover? Perhaps a former lover now handicapped and unable to physically express his love? I rather liked the fact that you leave his identity in question.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Loved it.

I thought the question form of this story would get old...but the way you wrote it was so descriptive and passionate, it was wonderful! I agree with the comment before me, about the identity of the writer, Great Story!

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