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Anonymousover 6 years ago

This is horrible.

Fix your verb tenses.

Reread your story before you post it. I am sure if you had you would have abandoned this project (and perhaps your hobby) before you had started.

Anonymousalmost 13 years ago

Seattle LOVES YOUR STORY!!!!!!!!

Please cont. with this.

Anonymousalmost 13 years ago

Excellent Start.

Please continue.

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