All Comments on 'Yufuin'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

I kinda liked the start of the story, and I know it’s fantasy, but the lack of respect (or perhaps knowledge) for the onsen tradition ruined it for me.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Nice story

I really enjoyed this story. I like your unhurried, easy-going style, and your evocative descriptions of the resort. The characters are believable and emotionally honest. Thanks.

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