All Comments on 'Yui's Awakening Pt. 10'

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Anonymousover 3 years ago

feedback

too many characters/names, hard to keep up with

grammar errors

too many redundant adjectives

Anonymousover 1 year ago

no pussy eating

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Hello. I'm a lesbian living in Melbourne, Australia. I like to write about my desires and fantasies, as well as my own experiences. I hope you enjoy my fiction series called Yui's Awakening. I have begun publishing the sequel to Yui's Awakening. It is called Yui's Arrival. Hop...

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