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by Brandii

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Excellent!!!

Really got me into the Christmas spirit!!! Keep writing like this and you will go far!!!

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Angelindisguise223xAngelindisguise223xover 17 years ago
Pretty good... except...

I really enjoyed this story. However... I was beginning to think he was with two women... Ellen and Ellyn... it was driving me nuts. Other than that you have a great talent. Just learn your characters names hehe.

sacksackover 17 years ago
You could have added more details to this......

It came across as a bit rushed. Has a lot of potential, you may wish to extend this sometime and offer it as a "chapter story".

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