by mspat
I'm so glad you finally updated this story, please finish this story.
Carl's ass would of had to go ...looking foward to you finish in this story.
Glad to see an update.
Ciara's plan to live separately from Zach to appease his mother was not a good plan. She wouldn't want Zach making decisions like that for them so she should give him the same courtesy. Hopefully Zach will have someone watching over his family when he is away from them.
Thank you so much for the update! Wonderful chapter please ignore all negative persons who posts responses...Just happy you have you and your story back! Cheers :)
It has taken you almost 3 years to put out another chapter and it was only about 1 and 3/4 pages long. Plus the grammatical and spelling errors were really bad. I don't think your other chapters had as much errors in it as this one. Do not get me wrong though, I really do like your stories. You seem to have a flair for writing different and good stories. However, you also have a flair for not finishing the stories you write.
Since you made us wait so long for an update the chapter could have been longer. Brie is evil and she is mesding with the wrong one. Emilee is going to tell Ciara about het evil plan and bBrie woll loosr it all including her job!
I so happy you continued the story we've only had to wait three years . Keep writing don't listing to negative comments . At least you giving it a go. I like this story can't wait to see what happens next thanks orchid man
No matter what is happening in your life, I appreciate the fact that you remembered this story and how great it is. I love Zach, Ciara and Emilee!
I love this series and I hope you will update very, very soon.
I was really happy to see an update. One thing stuck out though...When Zach's mother confronts Ciara Emilee was taking a nap. She wasn't in the room as stated in this chapter.
I know there is still a chance that you will finish this awesome story so I will wait patiently.... well anxiously until that time comes. Great job so far.