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Click hereTammi is almost laughing as she says, "Damn, mom. How are you still Queen? Could you read this anymore wrong if you tried? Let's start with Tamara's scream. That wasn't a scream of pain. No. That was pure adult pleasure. That's something I have never experienced in my entire life. Do you hear Tamara complaining? Is she bruised? She placed her body over his to protect him.
"Does she seem like he assaulted her? Do you really believe he raped her? Not even you could be that dim. My real question is, are you mad at them for doing it, or are you mad at Tamara because she got him before you did?"
Mom tried to slap Tammi, but the forcefield prevented that slap. Mom earned herself a sharp jolt of electricity from the force field.
I still can't talk, and I think it's better if I don't. So far, the sisters are doing well on my behalf.
Tamara has just pushed herself up, and she is pissed.
Tamara talks in a low, raspy voice that's full of power, "You need to stop hating men so much. It's restricting your options and clouding your view. Those are two things that the Queen of half the galaxy can't afford. This particular man has saved your life, assisted our mission, may help prevent a galaxy war, and just gave me by far the best sex of my life."
Mom tries to slap Tamara and receives a firmer electrical shock. Mom is knocked back.
In a flash, the room changes configuration, style, and color. I bet we just became a Thompson Industries cargo ship. That means we have caught up to the convoy. I need to be on the bridge.
To be continued ...
- COMMENTS
xaphistaover 2 years agoDear readers please help. I'm interested in reading this, but the last story I read from this author turned out to be a disaster that I hated (Bad girl). Please tell me if the MC is a beta, yes man, doormat, femdom boytoy like that MC so I don't have to suffer through another one. Originally I really liked this author, but after "Sister Wins a Bet with Me" and "Bad girl" I don't trust the author anymore.
Wargamerover 2 years agoThis is your best story thus far. I’m really enjoying it. Well done!!!
Keep it up, l hope your Muse has lots of chapters in your mind for us to read.
I could just lap this up.
Scores a well deserved 5/5. Next chapter please.
Anonymousover 2 years agoThis is one of your BEST stories... not for the sex, but for the story! Character development is almost right off a movie screen in it's best presentation. I can almost see the Tim character played by Chris Pratt!
mikentulsaover 2 years agoI am not much of a futuristic story type of guy but man I did like this first installment. Great read!
NSFW999over 2 years agoDecent story, but there are a few things that just don't work for me. The "action" scenes aren't good. They mostly feel rushed and that breaks my immersion. It's descriptive instead of feeling like you are an active participant. I hope that makes sense to you. Other way of putting it is: this is like a satelite view and you want first person.
There is also very little backstory that explanes the main characters, so they do/can do things and know things without reason.
And then there is the end of the story after they are caught by mom: it's unclear who is taking in some of the dialog. Tammy talkes about herself in the 3rd person? And mom falls for the force field twice? That's unrealistic.
This would be a 3.5 for me but i rounded up. Could become a 5* if you give this first part a rewrite.
AadityaSinhaover 2 years agoSuch a Great story to be very honest.
Some of the parts make its really good, such Science Fictional stories have a different feel. The plot and Story were well written.
The only thing I felt a little wrong was that the descriptions and a few parts were a little vague, I had to, at times, go back a couple of sentences to see what happened, little too abrupt. And one other was shifting of POVs, as someone else pointed out. It's difficult to differentiate the 3 sisters, all of them feel like a single person. Maybe if we know a little more about them and their thinking, it would be far better.
Don't take this as a negative comment 4 STARS
Just pointed out a couple of things where I felt it go wrong. Get the next part ASAP, waiting eagerly
