All Comments on 'Zane Wayne Pt. 02'

Loved it so much I hate to see it end.

Wow a great read, worth waiting for it to be available. Can't wait for the next story. Keep us posted as to when it is online.

Gentle, lovely & very entertaining. Keep writing; you have the gift.

Great story. Keep up the great writing.

Man. I really hate to see this story end. Well written a d really nice story. Give us a break and really consider continuing on with the story...Please. thanks mike

Nope! Sorry you don't get to leave this as is! Too Good you need to follow with them FTDS Please! 5*****

Well done Sir! A story well told and a pleasure to read. So? How about picking up Lindsay's Mom?

An enjoyable modern western. Thanks and please keep writing.

You don't need to change a thing, just keep writing.

Thanks!

Very heart warming story. Well done. 5stars

Another very very good read

thanxs for this part, I enjoyed it really. Please keep writing stories like this, with honorable characters with all the situations of live confronting them.

A wonderful story but I NEED more.

Great story. I was glad that you took feed back and worked the probation part into the story. Can't wait for the next story.

Read all three in 24 hours. Great read and you have a gift!

Love a happy ending and a hero. Keep it up, you’re doing fine.

Really enjoyed this, thank you.

OMG what a wonderful story. So warn and so tender. Keep more like this coming.

Flash ending ruined a good story. You use I am alot when im is sufficient. OtherWISE GOOD STORY.

That's an abrupt end ... I guess you took the advice to "leave 'em wanting more" seriously.

Thank you :-}

You wrote an enjoyable story. I don't know what your plans are, but if you want to pursue writing, you need to work on how you write dialogue. Your characters sound a bit still; use contractions more when they speak.

Great story! How can you not root for a western hero going by a name that's a mixture of Zane Grey and John Wayne? You definitely did both name sakes proud! Keep 'em coming my friend, and I'll absolutely keep reading 'em!

Great! Thoroughly enjoyed it and all the stories that you have posted so far. PLEASE keep writing and posting!!

Tbh I think you chopped the end off too soon, I get that writers don’t want to run through a formula where they and we know what’s going on, I also know that writing the typical HEA seems to be viewed as predictable and old fashioned by some authors, as a reader let me tell you we still want it and feel cheated if it doesn’t happen. 4⭐️ An epilogue with the HEA and kiddies would have gotten the extra star.

Excellent story but the end deserved another chapter or two!!

I would like more this was very good but i want to know what happens next

Ended too quickly, felt like there needed to be more issues with Tricia and her rich dad. Easily could be a longer series where Zane has to deal with people who threaten his new family, etc. Well done. Just want more

Great story I think you need to add to it one more part three some follow up to their engagement and maybe some wedding and a little farther into life children whatever and then you can have a happy ending to it

I really like your writing, please don't stop.

You are a truly exceptional writer. Once I started reading I couldn't stop. I read everyone of your submission and loved every one. THANK YOU!

Such a great love story. I love your writing!

Loved it! It would actually make a great film! You are a very talented writer! I know this is a point site, but I'm probably one of the few people not here for the fluff stuff, i like stories that lead to romance, and the way you blossomed their relationship, their union made sense, was poinaint and heart felt. I've read your other stories as well, and you know how to weave a yarn!

Wonderful ending...I knew where the jewelry store story was going early but the lest line in your story was just the icing on the cake.

I disagree with those who didn’t like the ending. And I agree with those who would like to have more. Like one poster suggested, perhaps with Lisa. You show great promise. Keep it up!

Thank you for another wonderful story.

Wonderful ! I read the two Zane Wayne stories without a break once ! Five stars !!

One possible twist would have been ,or could be , the announcement of a pregnancy, darkened by a possible attempted “Hit “ by the dead man’s family , brought about by the publicity of the circuit and Tara’s media post , resulting in a definite hospital drama closure

Beautiful story, thanks! 5/5

Simple and great.

Well, you had me interested enough to read all of both parts and that's about the best I can say about this story. So many potential problems to their love story lightly mentioned and then avoided.

look! you're one of my favorite writers.please write more.

Superb.

Another fantastic story!

I enjoyed the story and gave it 5 stars.

I agree with other reviewers. This story is ripe for additional chapters.

I went to a cow college; the "girls" barrel racing team was a treat to watch both while practicing and in competition. The young ladies on the team were recognized college athletes and a heck of a lot better looking than the football jocks!

One missing element is some type of closure with the hometown. How did his family get on? Didn't they have any contact with him even though the grandfathers were old combat buddies? What about the punks he put in the hospital and the threats to his life? Inquiring minds want to know...

I was expecting Brian's. Family to make an appearance and pursue their vendetta against Zane after being contacted by Tricia.

Excellent story but I agree with many of the others who feel that we need another chapter at least. Several unresolved issues with his family and home town.

Keep up the good work...

Agree with other comments:

1. Wonderful story! One of my all time favorites...

2. Additional chapters, please :)