All Comments on 'Zar Ch. 01: The Golden Cock'

I like where this is going. Decent world building.

Looking forward to a new chapter. Perhaps after I've gotten the gist of your world we might collab on a story. Or maybe a chapter.

It's a five part story, all written, so stay tuned... :-)

Mate, Katarra is the name of a female in an animated series, and I am STRUGGLING to read these early paragraphs having Katarra as a male character. I can’t. I’m out.

Huh. I did not know that. Sorry.