All Comments on 'Zar Ch. 04: King and Queen'

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fuzeeta almost 4 years ago

Fantastic

I’m loving this story, beautifully written and incredibly hot, great detail, a fantasy adventure in the real sense.

Anonymousalmost 4 years ago

Excited to see more!

Quite enjoying this series! I would not have expected you to tackle sword and sorcery, but you're hitting it out of the park. Eager to see more.

(Kiiinda hoping that Zar can turn her moonsilver belt into, say, a moonsilver phallus (to continue emulating the Goddess) and retire to live with these warrior women once her quest is done!)

AlinaX almost 4 years agoAuthor

World building is a serious business, as is constructing a sensible plot with a satisfactory ending. I love Sword & Sorcery, esp. the latter, but it's not easy to get right.

Ch. 05 in the queue. Hope you enjoy it...

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