All Comments on 'Zasha's Capture'

by RomancebyFaye

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Wow.

I'm completely hooked.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
OMG!!!

I freakin' love this story. You better continue!!!!

nomoretears00nomoretears00over 12 years ago
Oh. My. Gawd!

You have to hurry and get the next chapter out, lol, or I may go nuts! LOL! That's was totally awesome and, oh my god, I am so hooked!

5 stars all the way :)

EMArnoldEMArnoldover 12 years ago

I've been told that waiting patiently is a virtue, so I'm going to try my best to be virtuous... but I'll admit that I await the next chapter with a degree of maniacal anticipation!

cutie4x8cutie4x8over 12 years ago
Whoa

This story is amazing!!! Sigh. I can tell already that I'll be totally at the author's mercy for the next few months. I'm not going to be able to think about anything else. :/

Great job!!! =D You're clearly a fantastic storyteller with a fantastic story line. I'm anxiously awaiting the next installment.

alexandra36alexandra36over 12 years ago
WOW!!

AMAZING story!! WOW!! For some reason, it made me cry and could feel Zasha's sadness and loneliness. :(

I expect BIG things for this story since it made me feel emotional. :) I can't wait and I hope it doesn't take long to get the rest of the chapters out.

Great job! Cheers!! :)

npiccininpicciniover 12 years ago
FIVE Stars!

That was GOOD! Can't wait, can't wait, can't wait for the next chapter!!

Authlim_of_XvimAuthlim_of_Xvimover 12 years ago

...only a cruel,cruel person wouldn't continue this story. Keep up the great work

Whitbeach1Whitbeach1over 12 years ago
so excited

Oh i was so excited to see you posted another story. Then i got double excited cause it was gonna be another good one! Can't wait til ch 3!! Hurry up, pleeeeease!!!

Contest4JenContest4Jenover 12 years ago

Why is that writers feel they have to stop at crucial moments....no one would mind if you keep going :D I truly hope you bring out the next chapter soon...i am addicted! Cheers :D

le8mebeele8mebeeover 12 years ago
Amazing

Never before have I felt a heart crunching pain and a hitched breath in my throat all throughout the story...i put titanic's background score.and read the story again...you stand up to your name...sigh...plz finish the story and write more stories in this category...this reminds me of the story evolution and adoration...i think.by pelaam...but the romance on your story far surpasses that...i do hope you'll add more chapters to make it more engaging and longer...kudos...I'm a bi iiiiiiiiig fan

poshbillionaireposhbillionaireover 12 years ago
Just right

Love it. You've got just the right amount of everything. Zasha's sadness is so palpable!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
*****FANTASTIC*****

Normally I avoid nonhuman stories but I've got to hand it to you this was superbly written. It was very engaging right from the beginning and your details were excellent in describing characters and scenery without being overwhelming. 5 star worthy without a doubt!

Looking forward to the rest of this series!

-T.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
There is only one thing wrong with this story...

Part 2 isn't out yet Q_Q

uchenauchenaover 12 years ago
aahhhh the suspense is killing me!

I whole heartedly agree with Contest4Jen. I really have to know what's going to happen next i REALLY hope that it's Gowron who's demanding him but it could easily go the opposite way....

fukmi_allnitefukmi_allniteover 12 years ago
Amazing!

Totally enthralled from beginning to end. Waiting on pins and needles for the next chapter to ome out...

canndcanndover 12 years ago

a wonderful story. i'm hoping it was an error not to put ch.1! Very well written and a great job building characters who will be interesting as they are developed. I look forward to seeing if Zasha finally gets what he wants and needs.

RomancebyFayeRomancebyFayeover 12 years agoAuthor
There is more coming!

Don't worry. This is definitely only the first part. I am working on the next chapter right now. Hopefully I will have it ready soon. Please keep watching for the next installment, Gowron and Zasha have quite a way to go! XOXO to all my readers, and please, keep supporting me.

RomancebyFaye

LanaLove93LanaLove93over 12 years ago
FANTASTIC!!!!!!

AWESOME!!!!! Story cant wait to read more update soon please

SVBLIXSVBLIXover 12 years ago
HURRY PLEASE!!!!!

Gawd I hope that you are almost done with chapter 2. If you keep us waiting to much longer though I think people will start to plot your down fall...lol ;) Sara

SoullessCynnerSoullessCynnerover 12 years ago
Fantastic Start

It's got a great start. I'm not too fond of having to read a scene twice—once in one character's point of view, and again in the other character's pov— but otherwise, this is a really great start to what promises to be a fantastic, gripping story. Can't wait to read more of this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Ch 2

Please write the next chapter. Please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Please write!

When will another chapter come out?

RomancebyFayeRomancebyFayeover 12 years agoAuthor
Note from the author.

Chapter two is coming. I promise. It has taken me a little longer because I have been busy with work and other things. At most, I have three or four pages left. Once I have it finished, it's off to my editor and beta reader. Don't worry, I haven't abandoned it.

As always, thank you for your comments and feedback.

RomancebyFaye

le8mebeele8mebeeover 12 years ago
Yayy

I'm positively vibrating with the anticipation...I've an exam next month.I just hope.u post before that...

Thank u RBF..

nomoretears00nomoretears00over 12 years ago
Oh good!

*grin* If you only knew how many times my finger has hovered over the 'send feedback' button and made myself *not* click it and bug you about this! LOL! Can't wait to see ch2, this series is a real gem. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
oh thank god!

i just finished this and i was terrified for a moment that this was one of those stories that haven't been updated in 5 years and have been abandoned. I can't wait to read the next chapter! :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Please where is Chapter 2

oh Lord, I love this story.

Please write another chapter, or even better the whole thing, completted

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
chapter 2

no, really, where is it?

RomancebyFayeRomancebyFayeover 12 years agoAuthor
Note from author.

Chapter two was delayed due to my lack of an editor. I am happy to announce that I have found one and chapter two is being edited right now! Keep watching, it shouldn't be too much longer!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

*poke poke* you alive?

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Awwww I love this story so much already!!

With your description of the little antenna and big purple eyes on a little body, Zasha reminds me of a cute little butterfly. Lolz

I also love the size different between Zasha and his beloved....made me wanna cuddle. *squeaks*

whenwilliwhenwilliover 12 years ago
Man I am so loving this story!!!

Please keep it coming. Definitely one of the best!!

TheNaughtyKTheNaughtyKalmost 12 years ago
Waiting!

Fabulous story with awesome characters!!

I can not wait till your next chapters come out!

Keep up the good work :)

LavonyaLavonyaabout 11 years ago
AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love this!!

I love aliens!!!!

Zasha and Gowen are extremely beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Poseidon7Poseidon7over 10 years ago
Freaking Amazing!!!!!

I love this story so much!

sm1982sm1982over 9 years ago
I'm not a big fan of sci-fi-ish fiction but

Damn, you're story is amazing! I hope the steep exchange finds Zasha back with Gowron!

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