All Comments on 'Zero Tolerance'

Get an editor.

I loved the content and the storyline, you have a knack for such stories.

As a suggestion, you may wish to go one step further with this adventure.

5 Stars from me.

Love it. Look forward to reading more about these 3.

I have only question why didn't Veronica fuck Cherry to using both her pussy and ass, it would have been the perfect revenge, after all the Bullying she had revealed in the past. Or made this a weekly or monthly Occurrence!!

Good story. Hope there will be a part 2 where Peri ends up going to MD high school where she and her mom become hookers for the gang members at that school. Veronica should give the cheerleaders 2 choices either date the nerds and geeks or have Veronica use her strap on on them

You get 5 stars for hot content. Small constructive criticism...use Grammarly free vesion. Good grammar and punctuation will improve the readability of your stories quite a bit. I'm a grammar Nazi and Grammarly found many mistakes in my stories. I hope that there will be a continuation of this. Keep up the excellent work.

Awesome!

Great story, steamy hot sex! The humiliation is impeccable, I'd have liked a bit more of physical sadism, but chacun a son gout. I really like the idea of Peri being included in some kind of temporary exchange (perhaps about drug damage) with MD. There she and her mother would be induced into the gang fraternities...

Thank you this might be the Best erotic story that I read on this web site . One of my favorite fantasy was about a teacher fucking a student with a strap-on in front of her mom because of failing grades and the fact that the teacher was a black woman fucking a white student made it that much hotter . Love to see a white teacher do the same to a black mom an daughter just an idea for maybe another story Awesome you made me a fan

This was awesome. Extremely hot. Grammar aside, easy 5/5