All Comments on 'Zeta Tau Alpha'

Wild and crazy like so many of your pieces. The erotic scenes captured the mixed emotions with the exception of the closing “barn” scene which was like a gratuitous tack-on that diminished the earlier scenes; ruined the feelings you promised in the Prologue.

The twist at the end was an attempt to express the cruelty of reality crashing back in, in an ever changing world, expressing the emotions of a lose of innocence of a simpler time and place, but thank you for your comments I guess I didn't convey the scene/emotions I was feeling well enough to the reader

The feedback/emails from this story saying I let down my lesbian readers should understand my writing is not always a bed of roses it can take twist and turns down dark paths much like life the contrast of such a tender moment between old friends plunging into horror i the barn seems to me to mimic life I write from my own experiences with a literary embellishment and life is not always easy thank keep the feedback coming XOXO Cheri

Hey, have followed and enjoyed your pieces — authentic. Complaints/bitches have nothing to do with Lesbian POV; this piece was poorly crafted. Ending Barn scene disconnected - WTF. That and not particularly erotic.

I didn’t mind the barn rape scene at the end. However you claimed it was your first anal rape. You recently had a story about being raped at a fraternity and you have also mentioned other anal events in your previous stories. I know this story is realistic based on a happening in your which I found extremely interesting.