All Comments on 'Zoe and Lizzy's Excellent Adventure'

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HeisenhugHeisenhugalmost 8 years ago

Zoinks! It'z zo zweet und zexy, zuch adorbz, zo worth ze wait!

Oh, hold on... I have to take a call from the Society for Limiting Use of Ridiculous Phonetics.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Society for Limiting Use of Ridiculous Phonetics.

SLURP, for short.

stroudlestroudleover 5 years ago
Great sequel

Nice to catch up with Zoe and Lizzy. Just goes to show there is a heroine in all of us.

I love how you convey the affection between Zoe and Lizzy

Sexy, fun and brilliant as ever

Thank you Smokey

Jc

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Breathless, astonishing and brilliant

FranziskaSissyFranziskaSissy9 months ago

Yes such days or times happen, then everything hits the ……

With a little help from a friend and yeah zack hero

Lovely tale and full of heart filling moments

Ten hearts 💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝✨💋

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