All Comments on 'Zoe Parker Ch. 02'

by BrokenMasterpiece

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oldtwitoldtwitabout 1 year ago

Sorry still average

chytownchytownalmost 11 years ago
Good Read****

Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Good start

This and the previous chapter are well-structered and flow well. You have surpassed many authors on Literotica by giving a depth of emtions to this story line. Enough that I have a a clear sense of being there in the story itself.

betrayedbylovebetrayedbylovealmost 11 years ago
Excellent

The tale of young Zoe is quite interesting. Please continue...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
5 *****

Like this story but really like to see longer pages

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Nice

Can't blame Zoe for the anger at all these people, curious what is to come.

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