All Comments on 'Zoey, My Dirty Little Whore Ch. 03'

by hornybastard66

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Please keep writing;)

I really appreciate the work that you are doing on this series sir, in that it delivers what it described and nothing else. The writing is good and like the fact that instead of creating several long chapters which would take very long you instead opted to do shorter ones that have a quicker turn-around.

Please keep the chapters coming. My only suggestion is for Zoey to be fucked hard by a group of wives using strap-ons and vibrating butt plugs.

I would recommend going a little more graphic in your story work.

Other than that thank you for your work

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
HOT

SUPER HOT! Please keep going...it should turn into a 4some.

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