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tarthearttartheartover 3 years ago
???

I think this might belong more in the comedy section or perhaps the celebrity/fan fiction.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

This was absolutely amazing like all of your other stories. Keep making amazing stories

theorisedtheorisedover 3 years ago

Hilarious and hot! Love it :)

4321sleep4321sleepover 3 years ago

Love the buildup and the fun twist!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I wish you'd found a way to fit Bongo in there more, to show what Rickey does with all of his playthings. (The name shift from Daphne to Laurel is brilliant, though.)

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