All Comments on 'Zombie Wife and Officer Midnight'

Truly not wanting to be unconstructive or unhelpful - but you need to leave the flipping apostrophes in bed. Or wherever. The story is not half bad - in fact would probably be reasonably good - without the blessed !!!!!!!!!!

I see from your profile that you have a cat!! I also have a cat!!!

We both have a platonic relationship with our spouse!! He sleeps in one bedroom, alone! I sleep in the other bedroom with our cat! Why?!

Simply because now that we are working through our divorce, we have become better friends to each other!! We cannot afford to each live alone! But we can afford to live in our house if we stay together?! My cat loves me! Why?

I am not sure!! I think it is because I am female and my cat is a male!!

I gave you 5 *!!! I really liked your story??!!