All Comments on 'Zombies!'

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AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Stopped after 1st page. Chronologically it jumped too much like copy paste errors. Girls were in woods and then suddenly they were with Dan? How did they meet?

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Nice job with the fight scenes. I liked your choice to have the zombies die off when all their flesh rots, having them live forever is unbelievable. (Says the guy who has no problem accepting the premise that stories including zombies are perfectly fine).

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

I miss those letters to Penthouse Magazine

WndrngW1zrdWndrngW1zrd6 months ago

Got a migraine halfway down the first page, by #2 I was done

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I promise that the stories I write will have a believable premise and the characters will be regular people.