by regularguy13
Stopped after 1st page. Chronologically it jumped too much like copy paste errors. Girls were in woods and then suddenly they were with Dan? How did they meet?
Nice job with the fight scenes. I liked your choice to have the zombies die off when all their flesh rots, having them live forever is unbelievable. (Says the guy who has no problem accepting the premise that stories including zombies are perfectly fine).