All Comments on 'Zumba 02'

. . . for the next chapter. We have the makings of an erotic thriller; excellent story.

I will be keeping an eye on your story for sure! When's chapter 3 coming!?

i can't wait for more of this story

If the rest of the story is as good as these beginning parts this is going to be great!

Please keep this story going. It's one of the best on the Literotica site and would be a shame to stop here.

that was amazing there should be more

you have to write the conclusion.

I'd love to c u continue the story :)

please continue this at let us know what happens

This is amazing! I want to know more. What was this final scene?

Is there going to be a following chapter? I really like the story!

The whole story was very well written and erotic, up until the end which ruined the entire story for me. An loving and erotic seduction by two beautiful women is very different from a regrettable encounter with a couple of selfish bitches. Her desire was there, and continued seduction could result in many more pleasureable encounters. Blackmail kills desire and ends seduction.

So it's been 10 years and we never got to find out what happened, it was ruined by the fact they filmed it and you didn't explain why or what they intended to do with the video.