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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
It was very cute :3

It was a good short read, the characters had personality even with it being on the less wordy side. If anything I would say to work on the experience that the characters might be feeling, that could help with describing the orgasm so that readers can fell what the characters are going through.

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Many of my stories are inspired by the universe of No Haven, an erotic RPG / slave management sim being developed by BedlamGames. Some stories owe a debt to the inspiration of friends. Most, if not all, will be generally compatible with your generic high fantasy setting. There...