All Comments on 'Caitlín from Cork'

A bit too thin and predictable.

Autobiographical?

The story line and charters aren't bad, but the whole thing seems a bit rushed or 'thin' as the other comment said.

That being said don't let your characters get away from you, but don't feel like you have to bang out a story just to keep your readers interested. If it's good we'll wait for the next story or chapter. I didn't pick up any glaring spelling or grammar errors, but they will creep up on you with the longer stories...

[30.10.23]

Que Romantique!

11/10!!!!!