All Comments on 'Rolling in the Meep Ch. 13'

I love this series! I got so glad when I saw this. It was a little short but loved it!!!

Wow! I've loved this! I got goosebumps at the end, it's beautiful!

Thanks so much for the comments! I really appreciate it :)

was hoping more really liked it hoped there was a part where elena and nikki turned into mermaids or a part where nikki and amarisa had children lol all in all really loved it

Thanks!

I've left the story open ended as I may consider returning to this story and making a trilogy, I have a lot of ideas that I want to write about so I want to get those out. Thanks very much for reading :D

I really liked both part of the story and would like more. And I second the previous idea about nikki turning mermaid. Also, would be nice if Amarisa could turn back and forth.

That's awesome that you enjoyed it! I would like to finish my new series and get a few one shots out first but I'll keep a trilogy in mind. Thanks!

If u do make this a trilogy and u decided to get Nikki and Elena pregnant u could have the lovers fountain water affect them and let them get pregnant by the two mermaids

I loved this story so much! The sex was amazing but more than that the plot was great! I genuinely enjoyed the story and while i don't know if you are still uploading new stories, I believe that a sequel series that deals with Nikki becoming pregnant, and then the story going through that would be amazing and really i am just looking for more stories of Nikki, Elena, Ahri, and Amarisa. I love your work and hope you write more great stories! Also, do you upload your stories to FanFiction.net? If so do you do it under the same name or a different username? If so what is it, I would love to read your stuff on that site!

@PietroAretino01

Thanks very much for the nice comment, it's really nice to see people still reading this story two years later, I really enjoyed writing that series and all the fans. I don't write as much as I used to but you can check out my newest work: The Twilight Dragon.

Great stories!

Loved the story :)

Lovely saga!!

@Anon

Thank you so much! This series was really fun to write back in the day