All Comments on 'The Bird's Nest'

Absolutely gorgeous, melancholy. I get lost in the lines and the subtlety of it. One of my favorites in the contest.

I see your point (something rare at LIT) but your work isn't half done. Its not a poem, its a thesis.

5ed this was 9 me of the strongest challenge pieces for my liking. Well written with out going over board on the emotion you allow t he reader yo empathize with your characters. Could Probably Be trimmed but it deserves a 5 and in my opinion a H

5 all the wayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy