by mondotoken
Fantastic story arc so far, loving every bit of the drama as it unfolds! But please don't keep us in suspense waiting so long for the next installments!
Started kinda slow, but really liked the finish. Cant wait for the next chapter.
He DID have an interest in you. He tried to make the moves but you shut him down and kept him in the friend zone. Then when he snubbed you, you bones the first guy who paid you any good will. Ironically if you had allowed him more leeway since you clearly liked him back then, then this whole ordeal may never have transpired.
But yeah she's right, this new power has some corruptible effects. The user will eventually lose themselves to a more arrogant and lust-filled persona. Dexter will probably never be able to have an ordinary relationship with a girl. Any girl he attracts will just be with him for sex and only because of the chemical. Agnes seemed to have been the only one who liked him before hand and she (almost too coincidentally) has someone else now.... I LOVE THIS SERIES!!!!!!
The sex scenes are good but the story is so fascinating 5/5.
Three similar words:
Peak: "I can see the mountain peak."
Peek: "I peeked around the corner."
Pique: "The review piqued my interest in the movie."
Interesting... I hope this does not mean that an end is near. I can't wait for the next chapter as always... As someone else said it is getting dark. I hope Dexter gets more hotties before the end. I like the idea of the anti-hero...
Just posted a NEW CHAPTER-stay tuned because it should be available in a few days.
Thanks looking forward to it. I hope Dexter gets more conquests :)
This chapter was kind of slow but the end sentence was great looking forward for the next episode
.....5 stars seems about right, 4 stars, too few. 8 stars would be too few, 10 about right, maybe a wee bit much....but 9 would be a near perfect fit. I say this for the same reason I wish for such a system, such that 1 star for the sickly, abusive cuck stories would make the message indelible. Somehow, 1 star in a 5 star system fails to convey the depth of despair and/or intense disgust some stories conjur. Likewise, 5 stars in the same system seems wholly inadequate to express the appreciation, excitement, fun, whatever you want to call it, that other stories generate.
Ah, well. 5 stars! Looking for more.
Too bad, it really was an excellent story. But the protagonist is not somebody to admire. Our even like for that matter.
I shouldn't still be reading this. The protagonist is a total prick. Still, I can't seem to look away.
More nonsense drama. I think Agnes might have been lying but I guess we'll see soon enough. I hope she was and her and Dex get together. At least she liked him before the chemical shit.