All Comments on 'The Morning Ritual'

by MilesKennefick

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
So stupid

She stepped out of the shower and he finished himself off. End of stupidity

mrwidehorizonsmrwidehorizonsalmost 9 years ago
Short n sexy!

Great little tease session. He's a lucky bitch!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
@so stupid

Clearly, you missed the point.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

i love how someone is complaining about teasing and denial in a tease an denial story. great story btw

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

This was surprisingly good! The juxtaposition between normal elements of their relationship and then Freya's capriciously inventive nature suddenly cutting back in - and her pups reactions - were nice touches. And, despite what someone else has written here, her use of both physical and mental techniques to dominate him lent the story an air of believability. The only thing that may have been an improvement would have been for an even more extended session to have taken place. Nice work!

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