All Comments on 'Hair of the Dog'

Either put this in fetish, or warn readers about the water sports before they get into it. You set your readers up for a disgusting surprise and yourself for a bad rating.

Just skip over the parts you don't like! I loved it.

And to be honest, when I was posting it, I copy/pasted it and forgot that it had watersports in it. Not that it's extreme, anyway. The man didn't have to taste any piss, which would have been a deal-breaker for me at least, since I typically put myself mentally into the characters. Hence the first person.

I knew she was Persian.