All Comments on 'The Roommate Pt. 04'
by Adrianneanal
- 20 Comments
marta21almost 9 years agoI have been wishing for years for this to happen to me, only to go to sleep and wake up as a woman would be so exciting!
Thanks for the story and thank you for keeping my fantasy going.
Marta
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoExcelent story, the "formula" it's a fantasy thing I guess, but I mention that just because I, personally, prefer the "real" stuff, however, this particular one, no matter if its is not realistic, I love it, and I am really awaiting for the next chapter to see what happens. Keep this going, best regards and sorry for my not so good English.
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoI wish I could say I wasted a good day reading it
But I just want to be her
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoI so much want this to happen to me. I have always dreamed of a formula that would transform me into a girl. Or a futuristic particle beam transporter malfunction that re sequenced my DNA wrong and left me as a sexy female. Please write another chapter soon. Write another 10 chapters and I will read them all in one sitting. No complaints or criticism here just a longing to read more and experience it for myself
Anonymousover 8 years agoReally enjoyed this story and you are an excellent author. Looking forward to more chapters.
Anonymousabout 8 years agoI totally agree. Totally amazing. One of the few stories I read all the way thru...now we need more chapters
Anonymousover 7 years agoSuper Hot story! Great writing, can't wait for more! You can't leave me hanging! Would love to see more of Nellie, maybe she and Claire can become lovers, hot strapon stuff? I'd also love to see Nellie with another girl with a penis, maybe an earlier experimental version who instead of having her penis shrink had it grow. Can't wait to see Nellie explain this to her family!
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoNothing worse then a great story that never gets finished! This was written in 2015. Here it is 2017 and nothing!!! A good Author grabs the readers attention. A GREAT Author doesn't disappoint the reader by failing to finish the story. You COULD have been GREAT, but chose not to. That's all I have to say.
Anonymousover 6 years agoI'd love to read more, but this ends in a very satisfying place both as its own piece and as a series. Thanks for the beautiful story
CourtneysSubabout 6 years agoNot normally my type of story im branching out, seeing different writing styles for different subjects. I must admit ive very much enjoyed this story. I love the mental manipulation aspect particularly well. I hope u continue on
Anonymousover 5 years agoThis is so awesome. I love it. I read all 4 chapters today and I'm hooked I want more. I can't wait to read the next one if there is one. I don't want Nellie to take the antidote, I want her to continue and stay on her way to full female. The thought that this type of thing could actually happen is so hot of a story.
SissyBrandyalmost 5 years agoI must say you did a great job of character development...I could feel the indecision and angst that Nellie had to cope with as well as the growing recognition that deep down she truly was a she and enjoyed all the benefits that came with it. Please continue with the story it makes me wet every time I read it.
SissyBrandy
daddyschackover 4 years agoThis has been a great story so far, please keep writing it.
Anonymousabout 3 years agoKeep writing, this is a fun sexy story. I glad there is no real bdsm in this. Just a transgender girl coming to grips with her new found sensuality.
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