All Comments on 'For the Whored: Stormwind Ch. 48'

Vicki is convinced that she is the main character in her own drama…

(Spoiler Alert) She's not.

I don't even know who Vicki is (can't remember her probably) but She's just stupid like bruh the last girl who tried that on one of Elunara's men died, so yeah good luck Vicki

I enjoy your story so much. To provide such a great quality story for free and so regularly. I do find myself wondering where you find the time to write without it impinging on stuff like eating, sleeping and such.

vicki is the chick introduced in this chapter

Often times I get confused when you suddenly change scenes in the story. Could you put some sort of symbol before suddenly changing events. Great story though!

I've done my absolute best to find all of the transition points and make them more obvious. Sometimes when I edit, I completely brain blank on the transitions, and I've missed a couple, I think.

However, the reason I don't add a symbols or lines, something, is to me THAT is more jarring and annoying to try to read through. It's a style choice at this point.

I've done much better than when I first started out, and I've tried to take every comment into consideration. It is what it is. I'm sorry. This reads better to me than dealing with symbols. I've gotten more than a few complaints and I'm well aware of the general feeling about transitions in my work.