All Comments on 'A God Of War's Hound'

This story was simple, and powerful for it. Very entertaining.

The imagery in the beginning was second to none. Like the part that it went from emerald green to red and black.

Not sure why the other hounds, because they were created by the god of war, would have a desire for Core. Seems to me that the god instilled in Core the desire for only him, at least partially, but left out the part with the other hounds that they shouldn't desire her. Seems like a lack of oversight.

Also I see one of the tags is love triangle so I'm curious as to where this will go in later chapters. Thanks for the upload

I can't wait to see the next chapters!!! A wonderfully written piece!! Please keep them coming!!!!

I sincerely appreciate each and every one. Now, as to the one comment about the Hounds' desire for Core, the God of War cannot control every aspect of his creations. Please also keep in mind that they are a combination of a God and of beast. The primal desire for a female of their own species is ingrained into their very DNA. Now, that being said, they have enough intelligence not to approach her in that way. Well, except for a certain beta. I hope this satisfies anyone who questions the same thing. If not, however, I apologize.

I loved your vivid description of the battle scene in the introduction. I would have liked more of that kind of detail and language in the sex scenes too. All in all though, a great first effort! Well done 😊

Wish the comment section was more like a forum.

That was a great story. Cant wait to how Kahlil will respond.

well used metaphors and descriptions certainly painted the world of your characters, their strength, lusts and action

look forward to the net

Now in stores - 'make-your-own-fuck-buddy-kit'. Just joking. Intense story. Off to read the next chapter. Btw, liked your 'before and after' of the valley; how flippant and imbecilic war is, the selfishness of it all. Thanx for chapter.

60% plot and characters 40% sex or story l9ses it’s way4999