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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/25/15

A waste of time. Nothing really happens. Not even a mention of emotions, let alone erotica

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by Anonymous09/25/15

What was this little narrative meant to be?

A story? Not-so-much. She beats him for some reason that isn't clear. I think, that in an attempt to be clever, you failed to write a comprehensible story. This was really just awful. No need to post again if this is an example of your work. No stars.
PS - drop the "true story" garbage. You're on a porn site and no one believes a word coming out of your mouths. It does nothing to enhance the storytelling but make us laugh. In fact I'm still laughing at how bad this was!

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by Anonymous09/26/15

Excellent...but too subtle

Clever and fun and the kind of relationship avenue many couples explore at certain points in life.

I can see how it wouldn't appeal, however, to those who masturbate in the bathroom... lol

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by Anonymous09/26/15

Well I liked it!

ignore the recently harsh critics about grammar and structure. I like the more realistic approach you chose. I would love to be in his place! Hope you choose to continue. I gave 4 stars for your realistic senario!

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by Anonymous09/26/15

I liked it too...!

lol...funny...as I was finishing this I was thinking it wouldn't be popular with those who masturbate in the bathroom with the lights off and the doors locked so their spouse won't catch them.

Then I read the comments and can't stop chuckling. Some of you folks are just too predictable

For the author (authors?)...Great story. Super approach. More please

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by Anonymous09/26/15

Superb Actually

Fun...
Has humour
Has nuance
Has the ring of absolute truth about it...

Not sure what wanking habits have to do with...oh, I see, the slightly complex plotting confuses the tiny minds of those who only have time and imagination for a quick illicit wank!

Got it now...

Write more....clearly many of us want to read this quality of material...

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by Anonymous09/30/15

Good stuff

A good read...and sexy...

Please do another like this one.

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by Anonymous12/08/17

check no actual damage was being done ......

and if damage had been done ?

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