All Comments on 'Scary is the New Sexy Pt. 01'

"Scary is the New Sexy" seems an engaging erotic adventure, with an interesting character mix.

An editor could improve your presentation, especially at the "your" "you're" confusion.

Good luck, and keep writing!

I apologize for the late reply as I have been quite the busy bee recently. I am currently writing the second part now along with a few other stories and intend to improve upon any misshapes from the first story. Thank you for your insight to my story, glad to hear you enjoyed it ❤

I am still a novice writer so all constructive criticism (or fetishes) are always welcome to hear back on!

I really enjoyed reading this wonderful story as it is well written with an excellent plot and with excellent character development. I do hope you plan on writing a 2nd part and I do not know if you are going to include Sylvie in their twosome to make it a wild threesome or just leave it the way it is now. Gave you 5-Stars. Retired Army NCO

I love this story.