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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
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You lost me at "We were both too tired to finish"

ticklechambersticklechambersabout 8 years ago
Keep writing!

It's hard writing erotica because you have to meet somewhere between telling your story and giving the readers what they want. Bonus point if you achieve both! Check out some of my stories if you like I love feedback :)

PleasePunishMePleasePunishMeabout 8 years agoAuthor

I should add that this was not meant to be erotica in the purest sense... the Master told me that he wanted a written account of my road trip and then decided he wanted it published online.

We have many more upcoming sessions though, so I'm sure I'll have plenty more material... this time without scenery or backstories.

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