by swingerjoe
This is one of the best! Pulitzer, Man Booker, and quite possibly Nobel, too. Thanks for a great read.
Good story, one of the best, there's nothing like the feeling of sucking a nice hard cock and swallowing his cum, best feeling on earth.
I understand that this is fiction.
I understand you aren't a professional writer.
I understand that this is just for fun.
But at least it should have SOME plausibility, shouldn't it? This wouldn't have worked if you had put it in Sci/Fi or Mind Control. And I found the dialogue to be juvenile at best. At the end of the day it just wasn't entertaining or fun to read.
The same annony left basically the same comment on three of my stories within a span of time that was too short to actually have read any of the stories, and thought I wouldn't notice.
Gotta love this site.
has to have a 1st time......some are naturals. TK U MLJ LV NV
This was a very entertaining story. I loved the enthusiasm exhibited by Mary. Some sex acts are just so much fun to do that it's easy to do them, and put your own pleasure on hold. A bit unbelievable, but that's what spurs our fantasies. Anyway, unbelievable is what great sex is. Really good writing.
Loved it. 4 out of 5. 😊😊😊😊
Aaaw... don't you just love happy endings ?LOL that was just plain fun... five stars