by AnonymousPerv
This story could go in many different directions, quickly. Come up with something extreme and perverted.
Good story, told well, don't need a sequel. I like the way you create new characters with each tale.
Liked the opening, and getting to the action quickly but smoothly. I think it could get much hotter with a second chapter, that takes it in further in another direction. Also, a prequel as to how she really got that way (shape morphing mind control theme would be fun) would fit in as well. Maybe thats whats missing, this story is really a middle chapter!
Not what I expected but you really nailed it. Very nice ending.