All Comments on 'April's Radical Mental Therapy'

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jpalsgrjpalsgrabout 8 years ago
your right

This story could go in many different directions, quickly. Come up with something extreme and perverted.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Hot, but enough

Good story, told well, don't need a sequel. I like the way you create new characters with each tale.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Well done.

Liked the opening, and getting to the action quickly but smoothly. I think it could get much hotter with a second chapter, that takes it in further in another direction. Also, a prequel as to how she really got that way (shape morphing mind control theme would be fun) would fit in as well. Maybe thats whats missing, this story is really a middle chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Very Well Done

Not what I expected but you really nailed it. Very nice ending.

GingerpiciGingerpiciover 3 years ago
Thank you

Very nice

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

It was different, but I like it keep up the writing.

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Writer of mostly oddball comedy and ridiculous situations. I've also written other stuff that actually paid the bills.