All Comments on 'Gallus Nigrum Ch. 02'

The idea of a black mans club where ravishing white women are totally submissive to powerful black men has been used several times. Good character development but seriously in need of an edit. There were often words missing from a sentence. Learn the difference between "passed" and "past". I gave it a 4* but only because there is no 3.5.

It is great to see you posting stories, but your Back to the South and An Eye Opener series are much better (better theme as well). Stick with Back to the South and finish that series up.

I loved the story. No big deal on the little edits, it's the story that counts and it's great. Hope to see more chapters. Thanks!!

Excellent storyline, wish I were there. Great writing. xoxoxoAnnette

The ‘worshipping’ black cock is taken to far at times….

Love this series and want to read more

I want to see MORE stories in this series!

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