All Comments on 'Witch Kisses'

by Vluirty

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Incubi is plural. The singular is Incubus.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Please continue

Very good start- please continue the story !!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Initial Description Turn Off

It's personal taste, but your descriptions of the three witches turned me off before even getting into the story...

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Do some damned research

If you are going to write about religious traditions (even those having been invented over the past century or so), don't jump from wicca to satanism in the exposition. They start off praying to Hecate, then jump to Satan? What the fuck?

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