All Comments on 'Super Seven Ch. 07 - Mia'

Keep the chapters coming!!

nice story THANKS!!!

I've been hooked by these people. I want to now when, and if, and how, families start to grow!

You need to fill us in what has happened. Does he stay with all 7? Does he end up with Allison? Please give us at least one more chapter!

Is life interfering again?

You have us curious. There are so many possibilities.

More please!!!!

Does Greg's dick fall off from overuse? Inquiring minds want to know...

love the series. I hope there will come more

You've mentioned more chapters but it has been four years so I'm guessing not happening. I hope someday you decide to put pen to paper and continue this...

Enjoy all chapters, even on retreads. Am waiting for the next chapters.

Okay, so I can't get around the fact that you have portrayed Mia as a 19 year old virgin who doesn't have a clue as to who her biological father is because she grew up in a Polyamorous Family. I mean, come on! In the real world, that girl would have probably been fucking boys (and maybe girls too) by the time she turned 15 if not earlier.

On another note, whenever you called her Amelia, the image of Elizabeth Allen playing the part of Amelia Dedham kept popping into my head. I've watched that particular movie way too many times I suppose. 😅

I also had an extremely strong suspicion from the very first chapter that all seven girls are trying to get pregnant with his child at the same time. With them being such a tight knit group, I could easily believe that all seven have their periods in sync by now. I'm also quite certain that you're going to have them be successful in their quest. While you're admittedly writing fiction, most readers are only going to be able to suspend their belief in reality to a certain level, myself included. In the real world, two or possibly 3 out of the 7 would be the best that you could possibly hope for. It is quite conceivable that none of them get knocked up the first time out the gate. But all 7 getting pregnant together at the same time is astronomically impossible. 😒

You can read the Appendix to my upcoming story called "A HALLOWEEN CAROL" if you don’t understand why 7 girls will never successfully conceive a baby together at the same time. I already know that it's coming, so don't be the least bit surprised when I vote your score down to a 2/5 whenever you get to the reveal.

As for this particular chapter though, you get a 4/5.